Again, I walked alone along the corridor of your heart.
I felt my feet touch the coldest land.
I took a breath of poisoned air.
I smelled something rotten like the worst betrayal.
I picked a rose but it had turn blue.
I cried and black tear fells for the abandoned love.
*I just wanna say sorry. Please leave me. Let me knock the door of repentance.
Is it ur own poem? Great works!
ReplyDeleteThe author seems to persuade d readers to feel suffering, rite? Apparently, ur words had touched my heart (T_T).
But, I found the inconsistency in your words ("please leave me"), initially I found the discrepancy, but maybe it was the secret key of your poem. I guess it's 'bout something undesirable.. CMIIW
Absolutely. The poem talks about a woman who betrays her lover. Let's say, she cheats. However, her lover keeps loving her. He tries not to leave her. She becomes so embarrassed for what she's done. She wants to leave him on the account of unbearable guilty feeling. She wants to fix herself.
ReplyDeleteThanks anyway for the comment. :-)